The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The projected bar chart gives information about the proportion of world
illiteracy
divided by region, by gender
last
year.
Overall
, it is noticeable that in 6 categories the proportion of
females
is always higher than that of
male
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males
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,
while
South
Asia
experienced the highest
illiteracy
rates, the opposite was true for developed countries with only a tiny fraction of
percentage
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the percentage
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of
illiteracy
by men and women. In detail, in terms of Latin American/Caribbean, 10% of males and 12% of
females
were illiterate, which
10
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is 10
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times as much as in the figure for developed countries was only 1% for
male
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males
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and 2% for
female
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females
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. Meanwhile, under 10% of males are illiterate and 20%
for
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females
is the figure for East
Asia
/Oceania.
In addition
, the
illiteracy
rates in men in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South
Asia
was
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were
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over 30%, under 30%,
approximately
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and approximately
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35% respectively.
Besides
that, the highest percentage of illiterate
females
was observed in South
Asia
at 55%, followed by Arab States at 51% and Sub-Saharan Africa at 48%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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