The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The projected bar chart gives information about the proportion of world
illiteracy
divided by region, by gender last
year.
Overall
, it is noticeable that in 6 categories the proportion of females
is always higher than that of male
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males
while
South Asia
experienced the highest illiteracy
rates, the opposite was true for developed countries with only a tiny fraction of percentage
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the percentage
illiteracy
by men and women.
In detail, in terms of Latin American/Caribbean, 10% of males and 12% of females
were illiterate, which 10
times as much as in the figure for developed countries was only 1% for Add a missing verb
is 10
male
and 2% for Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
. Meanwhile, under 10% of males are illiterate and 20% Fix the agreement mistake
females
for
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of
females
is the figure for East Asia
/Oceania.
In addition
, the illiteracy
rates in men in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Asia
was
over 30%, under 30%, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
approximately
35% respectively. Correct word choice
and approximately
Besides
that, the highest percentage of illiterate females
was observed in South Asia
at 55%, followed by Arab States at 51% and Sub-Saharan Africa at 48%.Submitted by phongnguyenthanh630 on
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