The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and teabuying and drinking habits in five Australlan cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and teabuying and drinking habits in five Australlan cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The chart depicts the results in five Australian urban areas of a survey about citizen's
coffe
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coffee
and
teabuying
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tea buying
and drinking habits.
Overall
, in
last
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the last
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4 weeks,
people
that went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea had the highest number in most
cities
.
On the other hand
, the urban
people
in Australia purchasing fresh
coffee
were the least in those five
cities
. Going to a cafe for
coffee
or tea was the favourite
activitiy
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activity
for Australian
people
in big
cities
. In four
cities
, except
Adelaide
,
this
activity is the most liked. In Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, the percentages
was
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were
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above 60 %,
while
in Brisban,
this
habit was just over
a
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apply
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half (around 53%).
Nevertheless
,
people
in
Adelaide
preferred to buy instant
coffee
,
accounted
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accounting
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for 50%
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of that
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that
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those who
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loved
this
habit.
In contrast
, buying fresh
coffee
was less popular conduct in Australia.
Furthermore
, All
cities
had
percentage
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a percentage
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no more than 50%.
In addition
, only Sydney and Melbourne
that
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apply
show examples
had a number than forty
percent
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per cent
show examples
. The others
such
as Brisban,
Adelaide
, and Hobart had about 33%, 34%, and 39%, respectively. Meanwhile purchasing instant had an average
about
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of about
show examples
45%-50% and took second place in every
citiy
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city
, except
Adelaide
.
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