The bar chart below shows the number of daily users (in millions) for Twitter, LinkedIn, and Instagram from 2010 to 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the number of daily users (in millions) for Twitter, LinkedIn, and Instagram from 2010 to 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the three different social media platforms (Twitter, LinkedIn and Instagram) used by personalities from different fields and their influences in the two years 2018 and 2021.
Overall
, in the
beginning
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time,
Selena
Gomez
had much influence over
others
while
Chritiano
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Christiano
Cristiano
Ronaldo was less than
Gomez
but, over the years it changed dramatically and Ronaldo became the top influencer by overtaking
Gomez
as well as
other
celebraties
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celebrities
. In 2018,
Selena
Gomez
had followers over 100
million
and Christiano Ronalo and Ariana Grande
also
had influence just over 100
million
at that time. But,
others
such
as The Rock and Kylie Jenner had just below 100
million
. To compare,
Selena
was the highest influencer at that period.
In contrast
,
Selena
's popularity reduced in 2021 which made her
least
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popular celebrity among
others
and she had almost 250
million
followers still less than
others
.
On the other hand
, Christiano became
top
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influencer in the same year by taking over more than 300
million
followers.
Also
, remaining artist influences
also
increased over the period around 250
million
but still less than Ronalo.
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