The chart below shows the waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015

The chart below shows the waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
garbages
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garbage
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are
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collected by a recycling center between 2011 and 2015 Looking at the chart, it is immediately obvious that paper registered the highest figures meanwhile garden recorded the smallest number From 2011 to 2013, there was a sharp decrease
on
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in
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the amount of paper. After outnumbering to 2012, it was
catch
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up by
glass
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the glass
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and
dominate
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the highest position afterwards. About 48 tons of glass were collected in 2011
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling centre
  • waste management
  • total waste collected
  • trends
  • categories
  • significant increases/decreases
  • analysis
  • public awareness
  • recycling policies
  • implications
  • future strategies
  • sustainable practices
  • waste reduction
  • data interpretation
  • environmental impact
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