The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the average
temperature
on a monthly basis in
London
, New
York
and
Sydney
.
Also
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the table compares the sunshine's
hours
annually in these three cities.
Overall
, the
temperature
in New
York
and
London
increased until June, after which it dropped substantially.
In contrast
, there was a gradual decrease in
Sydney
's
temperature
from February to June followed by a minimal rise
at the end
of the year. In Jan, the amount of
temperature
stood at just over 25%,
whereas
those of
London
and New
York
were lower at nearly 10 and 5, respectively. Over the next six months, the
temperature
not only in
London
but
also
in New
York
went up. It is worth noting that Jul was the coldest month for these two cities and the
temperature
peaked at 30 and well under 25 in New
York
and
London
, respectively.
However
, the figure for
Sydney
leveled
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out at about 25 in Jan and Feb, after which it plummeted during the next five years. Between Jul and Dec, the
temperature
in
London
and New
York
saw a dramatic fall of 13 and 25, respectively.
In addition
, in the subsequent
months
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months,
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the
temperature
of
Sydney
rose steadily from 15 to 25.
Totally
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In total
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,
London
accounted for the shortest sunshine
hours
at 1180
hours
and
Sydney
was
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twice as many
hours
as
London
.
Furthesrmore
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Furthermore
, the figure for New
York
was the
loagest
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lowest
hours
among others.
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