The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart
illustrates the average
temperature
on a monthly basis in London
, New York
and Sydney
. Also
the table compares the sunshine's Add a comma
Also,
hours
annually in these three cities.
Overall
, the temperature
in New York
and London
increased until June, after which it dropped substantially. In contrast
, there was a gradual decrease in Sydney
's temperature
from February to June followed by a minimal rise at the end
of the year.
In Jan, the amount of temperature
stood at just over 25%, whereas
those of London
and New York
were lower at nearly 10 and 5, respectively. Over the next six months, the temperature
not only in London
but also
in New York
went up. It is worth noting that Jul was the coldest month for these two cities and the temperature
peaked at 30 and well under 25 in New York
and London
, respectively. However
, the figure for Sydney
leveled
out at about 25 in Jan and Feb, after which it plummeted during the next five years. Between Jul and Dec, the Change the spelling
levelled
temperature
in London
and New York
saw a dramatic fall of 13 and 25, respectively. In addition
, in the subsequent months
the Add a comma
months,
temperature
of Sydney
rose steadily from 15 to 25.
Totally
, Rephrase
In total
London
accounted for the shortest sunshine hours
at 1180 hours
and Sydney
was
twice as many Verb problem
had
hours
as London
. Furthesrmore
, the figure for New Correct your spelling
Furthermore
York
was the loagest
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lowest
hours
among others.Submitted by m.r.zamani1376678 on
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