The graph below shows average cabon dixide emmisions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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amount

carbon

dioxise

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dioxide

each person

emmit

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emits

in the

Sweden

, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. Overview, the average

emmision

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emission

resulted from both Italy and Portugal citizens

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experiencing an upward trend meanwhile

emmision

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emission

rate was experiencing a downward trend from 1967 to 2007.

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Sweden

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having a fluctuation in the given period. In 1977,

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an increasing

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co2

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CO2

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waste

with

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production

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the most. Meanwhile, The United

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was relatively stable with

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estimated

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around 11 metric tonnes and still the country with the highest co2

emmision

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compared to others. In the next ten years, Italy and

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kept

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and eventually Italy

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surpassed

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in producing CO2.

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made Italy

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the second country with the highest CO2

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, Both

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the UK

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production of

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experiencing a downward trend. There were not many changes in the

co2

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until

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and

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continuosly

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less

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and both

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and

Portugal

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citizens kept increasing the

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CO2

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emmisions

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emissions

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The graph below shows average cabon dixide emmisions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

Smokers have rights too, so they should be allowed to smoke in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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