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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below illustrates some information about salaries and weeks' jobs in the
hours
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 of some professions in the UK.
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, the underground driver has the highest price for their work and the lowest one for operation per week. Meanwhile, firefighters work more than other workers. Police will earn for their 40
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 job 23000 after 3 years. But, at the beginning 21000 is their salary. Nurse has one of the little hour's work,
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 they can earn only 19000
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 a rise from 1000 from the beginning their start. Firefighters' money increases by only 1000 pounds . They can earn only 41000 for their over 50
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 task. At that time, underground drivers worked less than 20
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 and earned 10000 pounds more than firefighters. Their salary grew from 50000 to 51000 during that time. It is approximately 3 times more than the nurse, for their similar time tasks.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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