The bar chart shows the participation of children is selected leisure activities in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart displays the engagement rate, by gender, of children between the ages of 5 and 14 in several leisure activities in Australia.
Overall
, the boys
engage more than girls
in almost all the activities except art
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craft
.
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boys
, bike riding, and electronic/computer, all at almost identical rates (around 60%. ). Furthermore
, watching TV/videos is the only activity where the participation of the girls
and boys
is at the same level, with 100% of the children surveyed being involved.
On the other hand
, apart from watching TV/videos, the boys
show a preference for electronic/computer games, which are enjoyed by 80% of them, and bike riding, 10% less preferred than electronic/computer games. Whereas
, the least preferred, by both boys
and girls
, is skateboarding/rollerblading, with 40% of participation by the former, and 30% by the latter.Submitted by marianiculescu1103 on
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