Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify these problems and suggest ways through which governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Nowadays, most countries facing overpopulation issues. A lot of
people
live in city areas than before therefore
citizens face many problems. In this
essay, I will address some problems and solutions for those matters.
To begin
with, overpopulation causes many difficulties. Most people
wish to stay in urban areas due to
easy access to everything and they like to enjoy city life. Environmental pollution
as
a major Correct your spelling
is
issue
we can identify in urban areas. Due
to
, crowed Correct pronoun usage
to this
cities
air pollution
and noise pollution
are more common. Urban city people
spend
a busy lifestyle so, as a solution for Verb problem
have
this
most people
use
own
vehicle. Correct pronoun usage
their own
For example
, some people
do two or three jobs so, it is difficult to manage thier
time without Correct your spelling
their
vehicle
. Add an article
a vehicle
Therefore
, we can see a lot of vehicles on the road in cities
, this
will cause for
air and noise Change preposition
apply
pollution
. For example
, in Sri Lanka air pollution
has increased 2% in 2020, this
is not an avoidable issue
. If this
happen continuously future generation will be in a
danger.
To address Correct article usage
apply
this
issue
, governments and indiviuals
want to work on a plan. Governments can improve Correct your spelling
individuals
thier infrastracture
Correct your spelling
their infrastructure
such
as transport. If they introduce attractive
transport system Correct article usage
an attractive
people
will not use
their own vehicle for daily travel. For instance
, if they introduce park
and ride system it will be more effective. Many developed Correct article usage
a park
contries
Correct your spelling
countries
use
this
method for
reduce the number of Change preposition
to
vehicles
usage. At the same Change the noun form
vehicle
time
residents have Add a comma
time,
Correct article usage
the responsibilty
responsibilty
to Correct your spelling
responsibility
use
this
method for their transport and support to goverment
to overcome Correct your spelling
government
this
issue
.
In conclusion, many governemts
suffer from Correct your spelling
governments
this
Correct pronoun usage
these
over crowded
Correct your spelling
overcrowded
cities
. Therefore
, many cities
has
increased Change the verb form
have
environment
Replace the word
environmental
pollution
problems. To find a solution for this
both governments and individuals have to work together.Submitted by Sa.inaka on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Please ensure that your essay has a clear and logical structure. Your introduction should clearly present the topic and outline the main points, and the conclusion should effectively summarize the points without introducing new information. Between these sections, ideas should flow logically.
Coherence & Cohesion
Support your main points with concrete and relevant examples. While you provided an example relating to air pollution in Sri Lanka, try to ensure your examples are specific and directly linked to the point you're making. Avoid general statements and strive for clear and detailed instances that reinforce your argument.
Task Achievement
Fully address all parts of the task prompt. Make sure your essay not only identifies problems associated with overpopulation but also suggests a range of methods for how governments and individuals can tackle these problems. Provide expanded solutions and not just one example.
Task Achievement
The ideas in your essay need to be expressed clearly and comprehensively. Strive for precision in your language and grammar to ensure your argument is well understood. Avoid vague statements and focus on articulating your thoughts with clarity.
Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...
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