The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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traded
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years
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year
of
period from 2006 to 2012
after analyzing the table, in 2006 Change preposition
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samsung
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Samsung
number
of user
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users
round
about 117 Correct your spelling
around
million
which rose to 396 Correct your spelling
million
miilion
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million
after
six Change preposition
in
year
after that no record had been registered for Change to a plural noun
years
apple
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Apple
comapny
in the first Correct your spelling
company
year
but it rose gradually each year
and hit its peak reaching to 135 million
in total in 2012 but for ericsson
in 2017 recorded 107miilion of phone sold Change the capitalization
Ericsson
then
it showed downward
trend and Add an article
a downward
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touching
it
lowest point of 28 Change the pronoun
its
million
furthermore
, for
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the
first saw a total Correct article usage
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revennue
of 345 Correct your spelling
revenue
million
which then
rose to 436 million
in second
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the second
year
after some fluctuation reached
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and reached
to
nearly 335 Change preposition
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million
while
for
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motorola
had the second highest user Change the capitalization
Motorola
in
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of
total
of 210 Add an article
a total
million
but the number
had been declined Correct your spelling
significantly
segnificantly
each Correct your spelling
significantly
year
and reached to 28 million
in total
overall
, it is vividly manifested that Change the capitalization
Nokia
nokia
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Nokia
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Motorola
motorola
had the highest Change the capitalization
Motorola
number
in total at the Correct your spelling
beginning
begaining
of the Correct your spelling
beginning
year
whilst Change the capitalization
Samsung
samsung
and Change the capitalization
Samsung
apple
had the largest Capitalize word
Apple
number
of user
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users
at the end
of the year
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