There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experiences or knowledge

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and practical solution

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temperature

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global warming as these gases combine with other useful resources to create dirt and pollution

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, a report from UNICEF show that newly 63% of cars and other transports uses a diesel oil which main factor of global warming

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, dirt from factories and industries in the form of fumes

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making, may

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contribute hugely that help to make air warmer.

finally

, the using of fossil fuel which is immensely used by most of the countries for generating electricity or power may

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use of electric

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instead

of diesel

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which may help to reduce the figure of

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industries

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, a proper establishment of cleaning must be there to safe the ozone layer which

help

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us from outside rays. at the same time, energy

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from

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and

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may be more essential than using fossil

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subsequently

, most

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the

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countries

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geothermal energy which helps to stand against fossil

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largely

as a result

, a decrease in

temperature

will be seen

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,

temperature

rise

may have

great

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impact on life but adopting the following safety

precaution

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may help to reduce its upper Trend