The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The given bar chart illustrates the rank of ten different
countries
in terms of how much
electricity
was produced and consumed in the year 2014.
Overall
, all
countries
, except Germany generated more
electricity
than their consumption.
Additionally
, China was the highest
electricity
producer and consumer,
while
Korea was the least. China, the US and Russia were the top three
countries
that consumed more than 1 trillion
kWh
of
electricity
throughout the period. China’s consumption alone was 5322
billion
Kwh
, which was more than six times Japan’s.
In contrast
, Korean only consumed around 449
billion
kWh
in 2014. In the same period, the top three
electricity
producers were China, the US and Russia which generated 5398, 4099 and 1057
billion
kWh
, respectively.
Conversely
, the other seven
countries
that produced less than 1 trillion
kWh
were India, Canada, France, Brazil and Germany. Uniquely, Germany was the only country to consume
electricity
more than it produced. It consumed 582.5
billion
kwh
, which was 55,9
billion
kwh
more than its output.
Moreover
, Korea, the country with the lowest consumption of
electricity
, became the lowest producer with an output
less
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of less
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than 500
billion
kWh
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, electricity, kwh, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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