The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The given bar chart illustrates the rank of ten different
countries
in terms of how much electricity
was produced and consumed in the year 2014. Overall
, all countries
, except Germany generated more electricity
than their consumption. Additionally
, China was the highest electricity
producer and consumer, while
Korea was the least.
China, the US and Russia were the top three countries
that consumed more than 1 trillion kWh
of electricity
throughout the period. China’s consumption alone was 5322 billion
Kwh
, which was more than six times Japan’s. In contrast
, Korean only consumed around 449 billion
kWh
in 2014.
In the same period, the top three electricity
producers were China, the US and Russia which generated 5398, 4099 and 1057 billion
kWh
, respectively. Conversely
, the other seven countries
that produced less than 1 trillion kWh
were India, Canada, France, Brazil and Germany. Uniquely, Germany was the only country to consume electricity
more than it produced. It consumed 582.5 billion
kwh
, which was 55,9 billion
kwh
more than its output. Moreover
, Korea, the country with the lowest consumption of electricity
, became the lowest producer with an output less
than 500 Change preposition
of less
billion
kWh
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, electricity, kwh, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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