The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram provides information about how the
bricks
are produced for the building industry. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
this
process involves 7 stages and several ingredients, Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
clay
, sand, and water. It begins with the digging up of Use synonyms
clay
and finishes with the packaging and delivery of the created Use synonyms
bricks
.
Use synonyms
The first step is
to dig up the Linking Words
clay
using a digger. The Use synonyms
clay
is Use synonyms
then
put onto a metal grid to make it into little pieces that Linking Words
subsequently
go on a roller. At Linking Words
this
point the Linking Words
clay
is mixed with sand and water; Use synonyms
next,
to form the Linking Words
bricks
, the mixture is either put in a mould or cut by a wire cutter.
Once the procedure to form them is finished, the created Use synonyms
bricks
need to be dried in a drying oven for 24-48 hours. After that, the dried Use synonyms
bricks
go through two kilns, the first one has a temperature between 200°C and 980°, Use synonyms
whereas
the second one's temperature is 870°C-1300°C. Once the heating operation is completed, the Linking Words
bricks
rest for 48-72 hours in a cooling chamber and are Use synonyms
then
ready to be packed and delivered.Linking Words
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