The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The diagram provides information about how the
bricks
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are produced for the building industry.
Overall
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,
this
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process involves 7 stages and several ingredients,
such
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as
clay
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, sand, and water. It begins with the digging up of
clay
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and finishes with the packaging and delivery of the created
bricks
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.
The first step is
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to dig up the
clay
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using a digger. The
clay
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is
then
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put onto a metal grid to make it into little pieces that
subsequently
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go on a roller.  At
this
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point the
clay
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is mixed with sand and water;
next,
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to form the
bricks
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, the mixture is either put in a mould or cut by a wire cutter. Once the procedure to form them is finished, the created
bricks
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need to be dried in a drying oven for 24-48 hours. After that, the dried
bricks
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go through two kilns, the first one has a temperature between 200°C and 980°,
whereas
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the second one's temperature is 870°C-1300°C. Once the heating operation is completed, the
bricks
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rest for 48-72 hours in a cooling chamber and are
then
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ready to be packed and delivered.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, clay with synonyms.
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