Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the computer course that has been
posted in the article yesterday.
I am a student with no experience in handling Wrong verb form
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computer
and have never studied Fix the agreement mistake
computers
about
computers. But I have a Change preposition
apply
tremendus
interest in knowing about systems and how it works . In the Correct your spelling
tremendous
article
it is mentioned that the eligibility criteria for the program is Add a comma
article,
to
people who have Change preposition
for
had
completed their elementary course.
I am requesting you to give me some exception to Unnecessary verb
apply
enroll
for Change the spelling
enrol
this
course at your prestigious organisation. It would really help me to pursue my dreams.
Thank you for considering my request. Looking forward to hearing from you.Submitted by insighttribez on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Although you provided a greeting and closing, the main body of your letter lacked a clear logical structure. Consider organizing your thoughts into clear paragraphs, ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a single idea.
Task Achievement
While you have addressed the three bulleted points, your response lacks detail and development. Expand on your interest in computers, describe your circumstances in more detail, and provide a stronger argument for why an exception should be made for you.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,