The provided chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity.

The provided chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity.
The provided bar chart compares the top ten countries in terms of the
proportion
of
electricity
consumed and produced in 2014.
Overall
, it is noticeable that
while
China and the United States consumed and produced the largest
proportion
of
electricity
in 2014, Korea, Brazil, France and Canada produced and consumed the least
proportion
of
electricity
.
Moreover
,
on the contrary
to other countries, Germany's consumption exceeded its production.
According to
the figure related to China, 5, 398
billion
kWh
of
electricity
was generated in 2014,
whereas
5, 329
billion
kWh
of
electricity
was used in
this
country. Meanwhile, the
united states
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generated 4,099
billion
kWh
of
electricity
, only 3,8.66
billion
kWh
of which was used by American users. Interestingly, Russia, as the third top-ranked country in terms of producing and consuming
electricity
, generated one-fifth of the
proportion
produced in China, at 1.057, 1038 of which was consumed in the year in question. In terms of generating and using electrical power,
by
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considering Germany an exception, in which
the
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consumption exceeded its production by 2010,
while
the other six countries supplied their users with less than a thousand
billion
kwh
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kWh
of
electricity
, it sufficed the local users, as less was consumed in comparison with production ratios.
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