The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar graph compares the transportation methods

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used to travel to and from work in a European city in three different years.

Overall

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there were significant changes every year and the percentage of people who used cars increased dramatically and showed an inverse trend for the bus.

To begin

with,In 1960 ,

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popular transportation method was

bus

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a bus

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, about just below 40% and approximately 27% of people used the tube.

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,the usage of

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trains

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was around 18% ,

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the cars were the category that used the lowest amount of commuters,about 7%.

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,aster the next two decades,trends changed considerably,

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buses and trains were at the top,

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approximately 28%

while

the percentage of individuals who used cars climbed up to 23%.

However

, the use of tubes dropped by 5% during the time period. In the following year,in 2000 ,there was a significant

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in car users, reaching

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just below 40% and the proportion of users that travelled by tube and train

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25%

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22%.

finally

, the commuters who used buses as there transportation way were gradually went down over the period and accounted 15% in 2000.