You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:give details about the concertdescribe how you won the ticketsexplain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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Dear Mandeep, I hope you and your family are all well. It was so wonderful to spend time with all of you

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month. It felt great to catch up with you and Jaskaran, get to know your children and have fun together after so long.You have always been dear friends of mine

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and always will be. Anyway, the reason I am writing is that I have some good news. I won two tickets to a concert by

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Moosewala. He is doing a live show in Toronto next month (26 July). I had

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a lottery online and there was a first prize of 1 Million CAD and the Second was for 100k Dollars. I won third prize which was 2 tickets for the show. As earlier we have discussed our same interest in

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singer. I want you to come with me on

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show. I look forward to seeing you. Best regards, Sukh

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coherence cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a singular idea to enhance clarity.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a more structured approach with a clear opening, development, and conclusion.

task achievement

Ensure that all aspects of the prompt are addressed uniformly, with more detail on why you're choosing your friend.

coherence cohesion

Use a more varied and complex sentence structure to enhance the quality of writing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

156 words

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