You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:give details about the concertdescribe how you won the ticketsexplain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

Dear Mandeep, I hope you and your family are all well. It was so wonderful to spend time with all of you
month. It felt great to catch up with you and Jaskaran, get to know your children and have fun together after so long.You have always been dear friends of mine
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and always will be. Anyway, the reason I am writing is that I have some good news. I won two tickets to a concert by
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Moosewala. He is doing a live show in Toronto next month (26 July). I had
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a lottery online and there was a first prize of 1 Million CAD and the Second was for 100k Dollars. I won third prize which was 2 tickets for the show. As earlier we have discussed our same interest in
singer. I want you to come with me on
show. I look forward to seeing you. Best regards, Sukh
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Ensure that all aspects of the prompt are addressed uniformly, with more detail on why you're choosing your friend.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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