Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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taught
children
either by parents
or school
. Some people consider parents
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responsibility
while
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children
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children
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manners
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members
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. there are many ways for them to do this
duty. For example
, parents
should encourage their children
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Also
, parents
should teach politeness and human kind
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humankind
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a flexible
manner
is necessary in this
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students
. Therefore
, their manner
and speeches influence significantly on children
, even more than parents
. Teachers
should induce correct manners to
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in
students
at school
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, teachers
should teach thinking skill
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decisions
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problems
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parents
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your essay has a clear and logical structure, with distinct paragraphs for the introduction, main body (discussing each view), and conclusion. Use cohesive devices appropriately to link ideas and paragraphs.
task achievement
Content should fully address the task, ensuring that both views and your own opinion are covered comprehensively. Ideas should be clear, extended, and supported by relevant examples or experiences.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion