The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.

The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year as the projects are set up.
The table presents the
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prices for sustainable forestry projects in the
next
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following years in American dollars for West Africa, Central America and
South-east
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Southeast
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Asia,and the pie chart shows the four projected
expenditures
in the first
year
. It is clear from the table that in Central America, there will be a considerable fall in
costs
,
while
Southeast Asia is going to see a steady annual rise over the next 5 years. In the pie chart, the majority of the
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will be spent on salaries. Now, turning to the details, in Southeast Asia , the projected
costs
will witness an increase, reaching from 30
million
to 50
million
, the largest price among any
projects
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. Meanwhile, in Central
America
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there are planned to be significant drops from 20
million
to 12
million
in the second
year
.
However
,
in
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the rest of the years, prices will be stable at 5%.
Although
costs
in West Africa will hit the lowest price in American dollars , accounting for 3.5
million
at the end
of the
year
. Looking at the pie chart , it is obvious that exactly half of the
expenditures
are planned to be spent on salaries.
Nevertheless
, the
expenditures
will
also
be used for
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costs
, accounting for a third of the total.
In addition
, training and office expenses are projected to comprise the lowest
expenditures
in
Year
One, 10% respectively
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