The table below shows the projected growth of global freight by 2050 and how this will affect carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions.

The table below shows the projected growth of global freight by 2050 and how this will affect carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions.
The table chart illustrates the information about the expected
growth
of global freight from 2010 to 2050 and what effects it will have
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carbon dioxide emissions.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that air will have the biggest
growth
percentage among other categories both in terms of CO2 emissions and freight volume. Only
sea
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is expected to have the smallest proportion of
growth
compared to others. Air started by 191 billion tons/km in 2010, which is expected to reach 11,11 by 2050 with 482%
growth
. In 2010, air had 150
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tons of CO2 emission, which went up to 767 million tons. Road and Rail will have
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percentage
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of
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,
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reaching 384% and
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accounting
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349% in terms of freight volume.
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is followed by 304% and 250% in terms of CO2 emissions.
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will have the smallest percentage of
growth
by 2050.
Moreover
, its
growth
of global
fereight
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freight
by 2050 will reach 327% and projected carbon emission will be responsible for 328%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words growth with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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