73.The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The maps above illustrate different aspects
ofthe
city of Springer, comparing the year 1970 with today. The main changes are a reduction in farmland and forest areas, an increase in housing areas (Correct your spelling
of the
houses
and apartments) and shops, and the construction of new facilities such
as a school, an airport, and new roads.
In 1970, in the North, there were a few houses
and a huge forest area
which were replaced by apartments and an airport, remaining a small piece of the original forest. In the South, where there was a great farmland area
, nowadays there are apartments, retail, and houses
. A small area
for farms is still observed in the Southeast.
In the middle of the town, there were forests, houses
and some shops. Currently, there are more stores, a new educational institution, and no housing. In the East, a portion of the green area
was preserved as in the past. Now, there is an airport and new lanes and avenues are being built around all
the county.Correct determiner usage
apply
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