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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.
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The maps illustrate the changes made to the Spanish
city
 of Castellon from 2000 until today.
Overall
, the entire surrounding area of the coastal
city
 has seen significant improvements in terms of new facilities, buildings, and
pesdestrian
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pedestrian
path
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paths
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. In 2000, the region located among the seaport and access road remained largely unused.
However
, nowadays, bars and clubs are built at the bottom right-hand corner, and in close proximity,
movie
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theater
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 has been established in opposition to them.
In addition
, the access road has completely changed the function of a
pesdestrian
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pedestrian
. Throughout the duration, the
city
center
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 has remained situated in the same location, but at present, it has undertaken a bike rental scheme. A new shop has taken the place of the previous market on the left-hand corner, and a new covered market has been relocated to the opposite
site
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side
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.
Besides
, Castellon has recently constructed a new train station and airport, despite not yet
finishing
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. To the
north-west
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northwest
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 of the
city
center
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centre
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, they replaced a train station with a new police station and completed a hall of residence next to it.
Additionally
, they have introduced a tram line connecting the university and
city
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the city
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center
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centre
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.
Finally
, the forest has been cleared to make way for the construction of the new shopping
center
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centre
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, center with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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