graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
The line graph provides information about the proportion of populations that changed from 1970 to 2020 and the estimated number of populations that will grow for 10 to 20 years in four ASEAN countries.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was an increase in percentage in three countries for 30 years; however
, the Philippines had fluctuated.
Indonesia, Malaysia, and Thailand have been always increasing, while
Malaysia has been increasing drastically from 30 percent
to 75 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
over 50 years, Thailand rose slowly and almost flatted from 29 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
to 30 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
between 1990 to 2020. Even though Indonesia started Change the spelling
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the
lowest, it Change preposition
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maintained to grow sharply from 14 Unnecessary verb
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percent
to approximately 50 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2020. Despite starting highest, the Philippines had fluctuated over 5 decades. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, it was still maintained to gain population in 2020 by 12 percent
.
Malaysia obtains the highest number of estimates of increasing population for 2030 and 2040 with approximately 80 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. It is followed by Indonesia with 60 percent
. 50 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
is occupied by the Philippines in the third place. Change the spelling
per cent
Last
place is Thailand with an estimated number of around 40 percent
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