The charts show information about the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
The graphs illustrate the proportion of males and females employed in four distinct countries (Belgium, USA, Japan, Indonesia), and aged between 60-64 in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, we can see that the percentage of men
was slightly higher than women
in 1970. On the other hand
, this
difference
rose in 2000. In addition
, the total number
of people who fit this
category decreased.
In 1970, in the USA the number
of male employers
accounted for nearly 85%, and the number
of women
employers
was slightly less at around 79%. But in 2000, the number
of employees went down, especially women
employees. When the total number
of men
employers
only declined by 6% the total number
of women
dropped by almost 40%, making the difference
between men
and women
employers
almost 40%. Similarly
, Belgium had a significant fall in the number
of employers
and a climb in the difference
between male and female employers
. The number
of women
employers
plunged by 50%, whereas
men
's employers
decreased by 20%, making the total number
of male employers
almost 5 times as women
.
On the other hand
, the difference
between male and female employers
didn’t increase in Japan. Indeed, it declined from 20% to almost 0%. Likewise
, in Indonesia the difference
almost didn’t change, and the total number
of men
and women
employed only dropped by 15%.Submitted by abdullaevayt on
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