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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after 5 years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after 5 years.
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The first graph illustrates what
graduates
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 in
Anthropology
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 at a particular university did after completing their bachelor's degree course, and the table demonstrates the incomes of working anthropologists 5 years after graduation.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the majority of
graduates
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 in
Anthropology
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 continued working in full-time work,
whereas
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 the least number of students continued working in part-time jobs with a post-graduation study.
In addition
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, the highest number of
Anthropology
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graduates
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 were making over 100000$ 5 years after graduation. Most of the
graduates
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 in
Anthropology
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 started working in full-time jobs, the total proportion was just over half.
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, only 5% of
graduates
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 decided to combine post-graduate studies and part-time work, making it the least chosen option.
Graduates
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 who decided to go another way were mostly either unemployed (12%) or were working in part-time jobs (15%). The
graduates
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 were divided equally by 8% into 2 different categories: not known and full-time post-grad studies. Turning to the table, freelance consultants were overwhelmingly employed in the upper pay scales at 40% in both $75,000 – $99,999 and $100,000+, with just 20% making between $25,000 and $74,999. Government employees displayed a broadly similar pattern with identical figures at the two lowest pay bands, 30% in the $75,000 to $99,999 range, and 50% earning over a hundred thousand dollars a year. Private industry salaries diverged generally with 10% in the lowest income range, a striking 35% earning $50,000 to $74,999,
while
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 25% and 30% of
graduates
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 made $75,000 – $99,999 and $100,000+, respectively.

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