Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree.

Space discovery project is so expensive that

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millions of dollars

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. Some opinions

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that the

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should be spent on increasing living standards on the planet. I disagree with that opinion as I believe human needs to invest

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aerospace project for the development of science. Improving

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earth

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condition is

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as

human

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will continue to live on the earth for years to come.

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, some organizations and

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government

are already

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attention to

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the world and

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the

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living standards.

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, the

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has constructed public facilities

such

as public

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and

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of water in some

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undeveloped

countries. Indeed, the movement for better life quality has already

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and it

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not

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sectors

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budget

. I agree that astronomical explorations should get more

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from the public. More

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spent on

this

field will

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the next generations.

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there is a mission to uncover the chemical materials on the moon. The project

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by a robot

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placed

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moon

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for data collection. The

discovies

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then

will

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back to the earth for

further

research so humans will get new

science

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discovery

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. The next era will

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the positive things of the money which old generations spent earlier. In conclusion, I believe that the funds

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extraterresterial

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extraterrestrial

explorations should not convert to another sector

budget

. Some organizations are now working to

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human quality

life

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so there is no reason to forget

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space research.