The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph and the table display the average of daylight and
temperatures
in a
year
in three different cities.
While
New York and London reach their highest
temperatures
during the second and third
trimester
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of the
year
, Sydney has the highest
temperatures
from October through March. London has shorter days than New York and Sydney at least 1,293 hours less of daylight per
year
.
In addition
, London is the second city with the lowest
temperatures
during
winter
with about 9
degrees
in January.
On the other hand
, it is New York with the longest days. During summer it has the highest
temperatures
, reaching almost 30
degrees
in July. But during the
winter
reach
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the lowest
temperatures
between the three cities, just over 5
degrees
. Sydney has the
second highest
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second-highest
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average sunshine hours, with 2,473 hours per
year
.
In addition
, Sydne's temperature has only 10
degrees
Correct your spelling
10-degree
difference between summer and
winter
, reaching over 25
degrees
in Summer and over 15
degrees
in
Winter
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperatures, year, winter, degrees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperatures
  • annual sunshine hours
  • temperature fluctuation
  • degrees Celsius/Fahrenheit
  • climatic patterns
  • geographical location
  • seasonal variation
  • meteorological data
  • inhabitants' lifestyle
  • tourism industry
  • seasonal activities
  • thermal comfort
  • climate zone
  • sunlight exposure
  • weather trends
  • correlation
  • biodiversity
  • eco-system
  • temperate climate
  • tropical climate
  • desert climate
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