The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
The line graph and the table display the average of daylight and
temperatures
in a year
in three different cities.
While
New York and London reach their highest temperatures
during the second and third trimester
of the Fix the agreement mistake
trimesters
year
, Sydney has the highest temperatures
from October through March.
London has shorter days than New York and Sydney at least 1,293 hours less of daylight per year
. In addition
, London is the second city with the lowest temperatures
during winter
with about 9 degrees
in January. On the other hand
, it is New York with the longest days. During summer it has the highest temperatures
, reaching almost 30 degrees
in July. But during the winter
reach
the lowest Verb problem
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temperatures
between the three cities, just over 5 degrees
.
Sydney has the second highest
average sunshine hours, with 2,473 hours per Add a hyphen
second-highest
year
. In addition
, Sydne's temperature has only 10 degrees
difference between summer and Correct your spelling
10-degree
winter
, reaching over 25 degrees
in Summer and over 15 degrees
in Winter
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