The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the cost of adult education should be shared.
The two charts show the results of
adults
' motivation to take a higher degree and the breakdown of the payment portion scheme of the adults
' education
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the biggest motivation of adults
in pursuing a higher education
is due to
their interest in particular
issues and to acquire more qualifications. On the contrary
, the experience of connecting with new people remains the least. In matters of education
costs, the majority of people argue that each course should be paid by
the individual.
Change preposition
for by
To begin
, the first graph shows that knowledge interest has become the highest motive for education
pursuits among adults
and accounted for 40%. In addition
, the second reason is to gain more skills with 38%, only 2% below the subjects' interest. Moreover
, it shows that there is a similar portion (20%) between improving the chance of promotion and gaining happiness in the learning journey. On the contrary
, the least motivation is to expand connections with only 9%.
Regarding the cost, the portion between those three categories does not have a significant gap. The 40% of people agreed that the individual should pay for their own courses, followed by the employer with 35%, only 5% below the individual. Moreover
, the taxpayer becomes the least with only 25%.Submitted by floriehendr on
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