In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

I agree with

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that said: “In the

future

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all cars, buses and trucks will be

driverless

. The only people travelling inside

these

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vehicle

will be passengers”. In the way I

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lot

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advantages that will

come over

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the disadvantages. In

this

essay, I will compare the well-known

advantage

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advantages

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and

disadvantage

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disadvantages

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.

Firstly

, the advantage

from

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driverless

vehicle

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vehicles

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is the

safety

driving

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of driving

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. Every vehicles with

driverless

system has a great censor with enormous radius that can be tracking a lot of things. If there is a thing which is being a problem detected, the

vehicle

will be automatically turn into the

safety

roads. Actually, when vehicles have been ready, the system inside them has been get a lot of researches to make the most

safety

one. Rarely, the

driverless

system being negative information and problematic around the public cause the accuracy of the censor can detect with the fastest program.

Therefore

,

driverless

vehicle

can be counted as the most

safety

vehicle

than driving manually. For the

second,

what is the most popular disadvantages? It is the expensive price. The international journal from MIT said, “The comparison between people who used and not used

driverless

vehicle

are 35 percent and 65 percent, because the price is not cheaper than ordinary

vehicle

.” The

factors

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is the component

of

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them

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is rarely to get, and hardly to produce.

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is one of the new

innovation

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but, in the

future

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the price will

decreasing

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Overall

, from

those

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arguments above the

advantage

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advantages

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of

driverless

vehicles outweigh the

disadvantage

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disadvantages

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of

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apply

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them

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