In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the past, many

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tended to live in the countryside rather than

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to the urban areas. Nowadays, more and more

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are flocking to the

cities

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and

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impacting the declining population of

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rural places’ population. Many

people

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move

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to the

cities

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on the ground that there are

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more jobs and better quality of

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. The first main reason why many

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move

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to the

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is that there is much more opportunity to get a job. Recently, many urban areas have grown as industrial

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which require a plethora of businessmen to set up their companies and employees to work in

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shops, supermarkets, and offices. Tokyo,

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, when the Japanese government developed

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city with many

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, they needed a lot of employees.

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, many

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from the countryside urbanize to

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city to work there and it can significantly decrease the

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number of rural

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citizens in Japan. The second primary reason is that many

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have better quality of

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. Nowadays, many parents have tended to choose the best schools or

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for their children and the best choice for

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purpose is moving to the city because many

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have better

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quality.

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, many top-ranked

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around the world have been established in the

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.

London

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,

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, has top ten

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as Cambridge University, University of Oxford, and University of College

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.

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, more teenagers not only from England but

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from other countries have been attracted to

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to

London

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to pursue their

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education

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.

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phenomenon can lead to a sharp increase in the population density of

London

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. In conclusion, many metropolitan areas can become the destination of many

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from the countryside because the

cities

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provide

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many

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more

opportunity

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opportunities

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for

people

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’s

career

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careers

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and the

highest ranked

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universities

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or schools that they have.