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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given three pie charts depict the ways of disposing of waste in
Korea
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, Sweden and the United Kingdom.They have used five strategies to manage garbage
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 as recycling, incineration, underground, chemical treatment and dumping at sea.
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,
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 the most popular method in
Korea
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 is recycling litter, the other two countries practised mostly burry waste underground.
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 the United Kingdom used four types of methods out of five, the Republic of
Korea
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 and Sweden used the same three types only. Looking at the given information,the major practice of
Korea
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 to manage Garbage is recycling which accounts for 69% and its second most common technique is to bury garbage standing out for 22%.
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, in Sweden, these two methods occurred
vice
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and vice
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 versa where underground technique and recycling account for 55% and 25% respectively. When considering how the United Kingdom dealt with
this
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 issue, 82% of waste is buried and used chemical treatment and dumping of
sea
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the sea
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 in equal percentages of 8%. The most rarely used technique is incineration
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 recycling is not taken into practice

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words korea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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