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The graph below shows that the percentages of Australian export to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows that the percentages of Australian export to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
#percentages #australian #export #countries
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the percentage of
export
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exports
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 to four countries
since
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from
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 1990 to 2012. Regarding the
first
 year of the report (1990), Japan had the
first
place
 by far other countries at about 26.
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,
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the US
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 held the second position at just over 11.
In addition
, China was in
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last
place
 and it was closely followed by
India
 and
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both
 of them were around 3 to 4. In regard
Japan
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, Japan started
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the
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first
place
 but it was in
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second
place
at
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 the
last
 year of the record.
Although
,
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India
 was almost at the
last
 position at the beginning, it was in the
first
place
 at the 2012.
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The US
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 had second
place
 but after a wide range of fluctuation during
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 22 years,
at
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 the
end
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 it was
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the
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thirs
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third
this
place
.
India
 was flat
at
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 the
first
 10 years but after
that
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 it started
ti raise
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to rise
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 gradually.
Overall
, even though
India
 had
huge
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a huge
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 jump from
last
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 position to the
first
, almost all the countries stayed at their places.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words first, place, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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