The diagram below shows the stages and equipement used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagram below shows the stages and equipement used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Both the process diagram illustrates the steps and machines used to make
cement
, and how
cement
is used to make concrete for manufacturing purposes. Apparently, at first glance, there are five stages to making
cement
, starting from the crushing of two raw materials and ending with packing the
cement
in sacks,
while
there is only one stage to make concrete with the produced
cement
. Beginning with the procedure of manufacturing
cement
,
the first step is
to crush limestone and clay together in the crusher.
Next,
this
mixture which is in the powdered form is
further
transferred to the mixer with the help of pipes.
After
this
, it goes through a rotating heater, where heat is added and the product is moved to the grinder where
cement
is formed. The
last
stage of the action is the packaging. Cements are packed in bags to sell in the market and half of the
cement
is
also
used for various things. The second procedure explains the step of concrete production, where in a concrete mixer,
cement
, water, sand and small stones are used in proportions of 15%, 10%, 25%, and 50% respectively. They are churned together in the concrete mixer so that the gravel which has the highest proportion to make concrete is crushed properly.
Thus
, it can be inferred from the diagram that it is a very elaborate and hard-core technique.
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