The two maps illustrate how the access road to the hospital has evolved between 2007 and 2010.

The two maps illustrate how the access road to the hospital has evolved between 2007 and 2010.
The two maps illustrate how the
access
road
to the hospital has evolved between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the hospital city has increased in size, renewing its
road
infrastructure and creating new public services. In 2007, the hospital city had a direct
access
road
to the hospital, which shared the parking area for staff and the public.
Furthermore
, the bus stop was located on the central street of the hospital, where cars had to pass through to reach the parking. By 2010, the hospital city had expanded, and its central street adjoined a traffic circle that not only leads to the hospital via its central street but
also
has direct
access
to the bus station via a new
road
, creating a single
access
road
for other cars going to the hospital parking lot.
Although
staff parking remains in the same location as in 2007, a new public parking lot has been created to the east of the hospital.
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