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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. »

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. »
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The given line graph illustrates the difference in the value of
wheat
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exports
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 in 3 different nations including Australia, Canada and
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 Community from 1985 to 1990.
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, it is clearly observed that the figure
of
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wheat
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exports
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 was by far
lowest
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the lowest
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 during the research period.
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, the data
of
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 three different countries experienced significant fluctuations over the given period. In specific, the amount of
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 exported by Canada witnessed a trivial decline to over 15
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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 from 1985 to 1988, reaching a peak at 25
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millions
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million
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tonnes
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 in the next 2 years. Afterwards,
this
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 number
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dramatically dropped to under 15 million
tonnes
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 in 1989 before rising rapidly
at the end
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 of the period.
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,
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the European
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 community’s
wheat
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exports
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, which decreased slightly from approximately 16 to just under 15
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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 in 1986, continued to drop gradually to about 10
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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 over 6 years. Another noticeable point is that There was a small climb from 15 to roughly 16
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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 in the value of Australia’s
wheat
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exports
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 from 1985 to 1986, followed by a steady decline
by
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of
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 over 10
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
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 in the
last
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 4 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, millions, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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