The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.

The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.
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The pie chart shows data about the amount of money the
UAE
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government
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spent in 2000 with a total
budget
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was AED 315
billion
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.
Overall
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, the
UAE
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government
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spends the most money on social security and spending is the lowest on transport. A deep analysis of the pie chart provided reveals in 2000 the
UAE
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government
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spent on social security is the highest with AED 100
billion
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approximately one-third of the total
budget
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.
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, they only spent AED 9
billion
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on transport. It is noticeable that the money the
UAE
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government
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spent on health and personal social services was about one-sixth the total
budget
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(about AED 53
billion
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and AED 315
billion
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respectively). Meanwhile, the
budget
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spent on the debt interest is AED 23
billion
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only AED 1
billion
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higher than the defence with ADE 22
billion
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.
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