The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie graphs illustrate the average proportion of nutrients, which can be harmful to people's health, consumed breakfast, lunch,
snacks
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and
dinner
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in the United States.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the proportion of
sodium
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and saturated fat is normally consumed in
dinner
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,
while
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added
sugar
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is highly consumed in
snacks
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.
Also
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, all these nutrients are consumed in lower quantities in breakfasts.
Sodium
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and saturated fat are mostly consumed at
dinner
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, with 43% and 37% respectively, and approximately one-fourth of added
sugar
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was consumed at
dinner
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.
Snacks
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with added
sugar
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are highly consumed in the United States with 42%,
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only 21% of saturated fat and 14% of
sodium
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are consumed in the
snacks
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. Fewer amounts of these nutrients are consumed in breakfast, but with a similar proportion; 16% for both added
sugar
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and saturated fat and 14% for
sodium
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.
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,
sodium
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and saturated fat are normally consumed at lunchtime, with 29% and 26% respectively, and only 19% of added
sugar
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words snacks, dinner, sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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