Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Write about 150-200 words. 1. Option A: Cultural fest: This could include various cultural performances and setting up of food stalls of different cultural cuisines. 2. Option B: Sports meet: This could include various sports activities such as sack race, tug of war, and a health drive

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I was recently made aware of the survey that the school decided on a theme for the forthcoming annual function. School authorities want their faculty members to choose to reform the two themes tau have shortlised.

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is better for children more suitable, considering multifarious and justify in the following paragraph. No doubt that sports meet activity is a better

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what is more convincing to me is that multiple games including in

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competition will help a student identify their strengths and weaknesses

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, to support my opinion, I would like to mention that, sack races, and tug of war, are good game which is helpful for kids to feel energetic. they can use their mind-prepaid Stargate to win games so kids can learn multiple things from

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activity. considering all the above assertions, I would like to vouch that the sports meet is a good

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year's annual function.

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Ensure sentences are grammatically correct and information flows logically. Consider restructuring your essay to include clear paragraphs for introduction, supporting points, and a conclusion.

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Address all parts of the task more evenly, providing a balance of ideas for both options before justifying your preference. Provide a clear position throughout your response.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

203 words

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