A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about sudying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. give details of the course you took at the university 2. explain why you recommend the university 3. give some advice about how to apply
Dear Ashane,
I am writing
this
letter as a response to the advice you have sought from me about the course
that I have followed at London University.
Beginning with the course
, it was a degree in Software Engineering. This
course
is regarded as one of the hardest courses, because it requires a lot of logical thinking, as it focuses on solving problems using the digital landscape. This
course
has two intakes in the calendar year, and the duration is for three years. Furthermore
, the total cost of the degree is GBP 50,000.
Even though it is regarded as a tough course
, following it at London University has a number of benefits. First and foremost, this
degree is recognized by all companies operating in the Tech industry. Furthermore
, it is accepted by the immigration authorities as well, which would be an advantage during the job-seeking period or migration. Secondly
, the curriculum that is
taught is far more advanced than any other University. Hence
, it is a perfect opportunity to enhance your knowledge.
As far as the application is concerned, my advice is to apply via their official website, and not via agents, because there could be frauds happening when applying through an agent. The application process on their website is simple because you only need to create an account and navigate yourself as per the instructions provided.
I look forward to hearing from you, and If you need any further
information, please do contact me.
Best wishes,
IsuruSubmitted by isuru.cima on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a central idea and that the ideas flow logically from one to the other, which you have managed fairly well.
coherence cohesion
Expand on the main ideas with supporting details or examples, which would enhance the coherence and depth of your response.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task adequately, providing details on the course and university, reasons for recommendation, and application advice.
task achievement
Consider providing more specific examples or anecdotes to strengthen your task response and make your advice more personalized.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite