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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
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The table shows data about the underground
railway
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 systems in
London
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, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.
Overall
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, the underground
railway
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system
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 in
London
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 that was opened earliest
as well as
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 the length of the route is the highest.
Besides
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, Tokyo is the
city
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 with the highest number of passengers per
year
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. A deep analysis of the table provided reveals
London
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 is the
city
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 that has the underground
railway
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system
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 that was opened earliest since 1863.
In contrast
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, until the
year
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 2001, the underground
railway
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system
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 that was opened in Los Angeles is the
city
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 latest has
this
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system
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. It is noticeable that the length of the route in
London
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 is the highest with 394km and Tokyo the
city
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 has number of passengers is the highest with 1927 million per
year
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.
On the other hand
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, the length of route underground
railway
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system
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 in Kyoto is the lowest at only 11km and
this
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city
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 only has 45 million passengers per
year
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, london, system, city, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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