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The diagram below shows how the australian bureau of meterology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a University lecturer describing information shown below.

The diagram below shows how the australian bureau of meterology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a University lecturer describing information shown below.
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The scheme below gives information about the Australian Bureau of Meteorology and
their
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 path of collecting data about weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Many parts of the diagram
connected
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 with lines. The scheme shows us many ways of collecting
info
 about
weather
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the weather
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. The first way is the satellite. It flies
on
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in
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 the orbit of the Earth and
artificial
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an artificial
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 module
send
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sends
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 photos of the Earth to the data
center
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centre
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. Meteorologists analyse these photos and enter their prognosis
to
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into
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 the central computer. The second way
require
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 the radar. Radar claims the Earth screen from satellite or
do
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does
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 the synoptic chart by itself and
send
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sends
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 all of the information to the central PC. Drifting in the waters of the Atlantic
ocean
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Ocean
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 buoy could be a third way to collect data about weather. It works in a bundle with
radar
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a radar
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 system and
send
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sends
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info
 about tsunamis and earthquakes to the center.
At the end
 of all three
ways
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 big supercomputer is
excisting
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exciting
existing
.
This
 machine does
final
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the final
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 analysis of all collected
info
 and
send
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sends
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them
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it
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 to the TV and radio as news, and mobile phones as
an
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apply
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attention. The
info collecting
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info-collecting
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 system is very hard and unclear. But
this
 diagram clarifies it and makes the information understandable for simple people.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words info with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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