A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary/unpaid work in your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to inquire about the unpaid work. I have been told that
museum
needs some pupils to work for the upcoming function. I want to participate in that as I need some more Correct article usage
the museum
experience
in security. I have already a good experience
in that as I am already doing the job with the Chime security agency. They are giving me tough sites where I need to communicate with other people and handle the situation without any trouble. I have learnt
already a good Verb problem
apply
experience
of
that.
As I explained the situation, next year I am planning to join the cop because of that I need to get more Change preposition
with
experience
. It is a good opportunity for me to make my profile more strong. It will help to get a police job more easily. That function is going to take place the first week of next month and I am available in that week. I would be grateful if you could give me a chance for this
. I look forward to hearing from you,
Yours faithfully,
Sukhpal SinghSubmitted by ss6802125 on
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task achievement
The letter contains some relevant information, but it lacks clarity in presenting details of the voluntary work. Provide clear reasons why you are interested specifically in the museum work, and further elaborate on relevant skills.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your letter follows a clear structure, with an introduction, body, and conclusion. Maintain focus within paragraphs, dedicating each to a specific point.
coherence cohesion
Use an appropriate sign-off for a formal letter, such as 'Yours sincerely,' if you know the name of the person you are writing to or 'Yours faithfully,' if you don't, followed by your full name.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.