The graph below shows information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Write at least 250 words and make a comparison which relevent

The graph depicts the number of

gym

memberships in thousands throughout a thirty-year period.

Overall

, the male participants in the

gym

outnumbered that of the female.

However

,

a

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women

's

gym

membership

witnessed a substantial increase contrasting to that of

the

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men

, which had a downward trend. Regarding the diagram, the

Men

's

membership

in the

gym

started slightly above 2,000 and gradually increased before experiencing a substantial decline in 1995. In 2000, the pattern began to rise again until it reached its peak, which was more than doubled than the initial count, at 5,000.

However

, the

men

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Gym

membership

experienced a steep fall ending the observed years just below 1,000.

In contrast

, the

women

initially

showed less interest in

gym

membership

, with only 1,000 recorded in 1980.

Nevertheless

, it considerably grew

onward

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and overtook the

men

's trend in 1995, which

also

had the highest number of female participants at approximately 3,000. In 2000, the

women

's

membership

fell to about 2,000

and

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followed by an increase in the next period

at

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around 2,500. Similar to the trend in male

membership

, the

women

's

gym

membership

also

decreased in 2010, standing at just below 2,000.