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The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the amount of money
that is
 earned by selling three different kinds of
books
 over a period of four years in a country.
Overall
, educational
books
 were by far the least important book over the period shown.
In contrast
,
children
's
books
 were the highest in each year except the first year. In 2002, the figure for adult fiction
sales
 stood at approximately 45
million
 dollars,
while
 those
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
children
's
books
 and educational
books
 were lower at nearly 30 and 25
million
 dollars, respectively. About half
year
Correct article usage
a year
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 later, the amount of
children
's
books
Change the noun form
book
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sales
 overtook that of adult fiction. There was a steady rise of $25
million
 in the
children
's
books
sales
 over the whole period.
However
, the figure for adult fiction
sales
 saw a decline of $10
million
 from 2004 to 2006. Between 2004 and 2005, the
sales
for
Change preposition
of
show examples
 educational
books
 fluctuated erratically, after which
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
show examples
 rose substantially by 9
million
 dollars.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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