The given maps compare the changes that took place at a city hospital in 2 different years,2007 and 2010

The two maps depict the developments made to the roads that are directed towards the City Hospital in the years 2007 and 2010.

Overall

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, a lot of considerable changes have been implemented near the Hospital.

To begin

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with, the bus stops in front of the hospital were removed and a new bus station was built in the south-east direction of the hospital. The Ring

Road

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around the medical institute was renovated and a roundabout was placed right at the junction of Hospital

Road

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and Ring

Road

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, which connects to the local transport station. It is

also

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noticeable that the car park space was divided between staff and the public. When we moved anti-clockwise direction from the entrance of the hospital on Ring

Road

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, just next to the circle was the employee car park

while

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the car parking space for the general public was shifted to the east side of the building.

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, another roundabout was introduced at the junction of Hospital

Road

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and City

Road

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, through which the buses entered the transport station from the City

Road

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Nov 24, 2023

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

177 words

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The given maps compare the changes that took place at a city hospital in 2 different years,2007 and 2010

Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that painting and music do not directly improve the quality of people. Therefore, governments should not spend too much money on artistic projects. Do you agree or disagree?

The qualities and skills that people require to be successful in today’s world cannot be learned at university or at other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphones. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?