The given maps compare the changes that took place at a city hospital in 2 different years,2007 and 2010

The two maps depict the developments made to the roads that are directed towards the City Hospital in the years 2007 and 2010.

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, a lot of considerable changes have been implemented near the Hospital.

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with, the bus stops in front of the hospital were removed and a new bus station was built in the south-east direction of the hospital. The Ring

Road

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around the medical institute was renovated and a roundabout was placed right at the junction of Hospital

Road

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and Ring

Road

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, which connects to the local transport station. It is

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noticeable that the car park space was divided between staff and the public. When we moved anti-clockwise direction from the entrance of the hospital on Ring

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, just next to the circle was the employee car park

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the car parking space for the general public was shifted to the east side of the building.

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, another roundabout was introduced at the junction of Hospital

Road

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and City

Road

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, through which the buses entered the transport station from the City

Road

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Nov 24, 2023

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

177 words

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The given maps compare the changes that took place at a city hospital in 2 different years,2007 and 2010

some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or negative development?

When asked to choose between a life without work and working most f the time, people would always chppse not to work. Do you aree or disagree with this statement?

People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?