the bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories
The bar chart illustrates the distribution of percentages of shares
common
spending in Japan , the United States , Canada and the United Kingdom.
Change preposition
of common
Firstly
, it is immediately noticeable that health care and clothing are a consistent minority among other categories . The proportion of the U.S. in the health service more
in Add a missing verb
is more
the
comparison with different countries - nearly 7% . Canada is the leader in the garments ( more than 5% ) . Correct article usage
apply
In contrast
, the U.S. takes the last
position ( less than 5% ).
Secondly
, food , housing and transportation are a majority among other types of expenditures . Dwelling takes above than 25 % in the U.S. . These indicators are more
approximately 2% than the U.K. which takes the second position . Japan takes the leadership with nearly 25% but consumption in transportation is 10% . On the opposite, different American Correct quantifier usage
apply
country
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
such
as Canada lead in this
rank with 20%.
Looking from an overall
perspective, expenditures
of 5 nations are distinguishable compared by ranking.Correct article usage
the expenditures
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