the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
The given line chart illustrates the total
visitors
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number of visitors
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to a Caribbean
Island
based on the location of their accommodations from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, a certain Caribbean
Island
experienced
Wrong verb form
experiences
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an increasing number of
visitors
annually.
Additionally
, the majority of tourists
favored
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favoured
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staying on the cruise rather than living on the
island
. There were approximately three-quarters of a
million
visitors
who stayed on a cruise in 2010.
This
figure remained constant before gradually increasing and doubling its initial value in 2013. The peak of 1.5
million
visitors
was sustained for over a 3-year
period
. By the end of the
period
, tourists staying on the ships contributed to 1.5
million
, which accounted for about 40% of the total
visitors
to the Caribbean
Island
.
Moreover
, those who chose to stay on the
island
were fewer than 500,000
visitors
at the beginning of the
period
.
This
value fluctuated until it rose significantly in 2013. It surged from 0.5
million
travelers
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travellers
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in 2013 to four times that value by the end of the
period
.
Additionally
, in mid-2015, the number of
visitors
staying on the
island
surpassed the number staying on cruise ships.
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