International tourist should pay more than the local visitor for cultural and historical attractions. Do you agree or disagree?
In some
places
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places,
visitors
who come from another country
need to pay more than native
to view some ancient Fix the agreement mistake
natives
places
. I strongly disagree this
statement becauseChange preposition
with this
,
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apply
number
of Change the article
the number
visitors
will eventually decrease and it will affect other sectors which depends
on Change the verb form
depend
tourism
.
In my opinion, tourism
is one of the leading economy
for many countries Change to a plural noun
economies
for instance
, Sri Lanka's main income earn
from Wrong verb form
is earned
tourism
industry Correct article usage
the tourism
therefore
, most of the visitors
coming
to Wrong verb form
come
this
country
to experience tropical
environment with Correct article usage
a tropical
rich
culture and to see Correct article usage
a rich
it's
related monuments. But when getting Correct your spelling
its
ticket
higher than local Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
visitor
it will create a bad impression about the Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
country
because they already paying lot
of money and taxes for local services and Change the article
a lot
this
kind of price amount is also
became
Wrong verb form
becomes
burden
Correct article usage
a burden
them
.
In that case, people who Change preposition
for them
are already visited
the Change the verb form
have already visited
country
Correct word choice
and experince
experince
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experience
experienced
such
incidents will not come again or not recommend
to others for their vacations. Wrong verb form
be recommended
Thus
, number
of Change the article
the number
visitor
will reduce and it will directly or indirectly affect not only Change to a plural noun
visitors
tourism
but also
other local businesses as well. For example
, hotels, local product produces
and sellers and more. Replace the word
producers
Therefore
, by providing reasonable price
to all the Fix the agreement mistake
prices
visitor
who Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
are
visiting Change the verb form
is
historialcal
and cultural Correct your spelling
historical
places
we can increase the tourist attention as well as
their satisfaction.
In conclusion, I do not agree
the way of treating international Add the preposition
agree on
agree to
agree with
visitors
by asking higher
Change preposition
for higher
price
to visit historical and cultural Fix the agreement mistake
prices
places
. Because it will create bad
reputation Add an article
a bad
to
Change preposition
for
country
and Correct article usage
the country
instead
of earning through higher prices best earn from their satisfactionSubmitted by n_wara11 on
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