It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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some people believe that it is important that the

history

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of the

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earned foreigners living in the

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others argue that

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is not necessary. I tend to support the former view which I shall discuss in

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essay. The people who have support learn

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argue that

history

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not

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does not

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always give

good

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a good

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impression or positive

feeback

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feedback

about the

coutnry

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country

.

for

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apply

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, the war and inversion

history

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of

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country

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will not

a

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good lesson to learn. They are

also

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pointing

that

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out that

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learning of the

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's

history

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is

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part of freedom of choice. There is no advantage to

taught

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teaching

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the

history

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of the

coutry

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country

to foreigners.

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, the foreigner might go back to

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their

home

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after some time. Learning

history

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will help to understand the cultural heritage of the

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and

people

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its people

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. Culture is often linked with

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history

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the history

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of the geographical area which will help

to

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foreigners to

easly

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easily

adapt.

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, several local festivals are based on the

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of the

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. The

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will always provide an overview

for

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the

country

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's political system.

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. The rulers or ruling party's

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will

beneficial

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to understand the politics of each

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. In conclusion, There are

pople

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people

who against

to learn

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learning

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history

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the history

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of the

country

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and argues

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argues

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that it is against freedom of choice, and

the

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apply

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history

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is

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not always give positive feedback. the supporters

of

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argue that

the

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history

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will help to understand

culture

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the culture

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and

policitical

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political

system.