It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While
some people believe that it is important that the
history
of the
country
earned foreigners living in the
country
others argue that
this
is not necessary. I tend to support the former view which I shall discuss in
this
essay. The people who have support learn
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argue that
history
not
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does not
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always give
good
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a good
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impression or positive
feeback
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feedback
about the
coutnry
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country
.
for
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apply
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For example
, the war and inversion
history
of
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a
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country
will not
a
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be a
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good lesson to learn. They are
also
pointing
that
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out that
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learning of the
country
's
history
is
the
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part of freedom of choice. There is no advantage to
taught
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the
history
of the
coutry
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country
to foreigners.
For instance
, the foreigner might go back to
thier
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their
home
country
after some time. Learning
history
will help to understand the cultural heritage of the
country
and
people
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its people
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. Culture is often linked with
history
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the history
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of the geographical area which will help
to
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apply
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foreigners to
easly
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easily
adapt.
For example
, several local festivals are based on the
history
of the
country
. The
history
will always provide an overview
for
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of
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the
country
's political system.
For example
. The rulers or ruling party's
history
will
beneficial
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be beneficial
show examples
to understand the politics of each
country
. In conclusion, There are
pople
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people
who against
to learn
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learning
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history
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the history
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of the
country
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and argues
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argues
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argue
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that it is against freedom of choice, and
the
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history
is
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not always give positive feedback. the supporters
of
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argue that
the
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history
will help to understand
culture
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the culture
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and
policitical
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political
system.
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