The given diagram clearly depicts the step-by-step process of carbonated drink production.

The diagram illustrates the

process

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of manufacturing carbonated

drink

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in detail. The first

stage

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is

Water

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Cleaning, in the

first,

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Raw

water

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is entered a Filter

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it

was convert

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into

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softener and Chemicals and after that, it is pumped to Electric heaters

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of

this

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stage

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.

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,

Water

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is mixed with Carbon dioxide through

Cooling

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pipe and after

that

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it

is

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enterd

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enters

the mixing tank as Carbonated

water

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.

Thirdly

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, three different materials

such

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as Colourings, Syrup and Flavour are added into Carbonated

water

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then

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they are mixed together. Next after a filter, it is provided in the bottles and cans in the fourth

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of

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.

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, in the

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, products are packaged as drinks and they are sent to the supermarkets.

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, the diagram represents a

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of producing carbonated

drink

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in a total of five main stages from factory to supermarkets.